With the Deyes there is no real link with its correct audience. the first page is set out differently to all the rest, there is way too much text on the opening page, too much text will just make the reader less intyerested in reading the text. so a clear need of editing with the text in this newsletter is needed.
There is a small image of the head teacher in the centre of all the text. if the newletter wants to attract readers and keep them intwerested in the text then a more interesting image is needed, as there is alot of text in this front cover there should be a larger image to space the text out. Down the side of the front cover the margin is covered in a light blue, red & turquoise print. the title of this newletter is an electric blue with yellow text, these colours are too bright for a newletter and does not match with the text that is used throughout the newletter.
Throughout the Newletter there is no clear target market for this newletter, it should specifically be for the parents or guardians of the students of the ongoings of the school as the stuydents will have already been told the ongoings in their form time. Since it should be aimed at parents it should be set out differently, there is a section called 'puzzle time' this is a waste as this woul be filled out by students or young children but it is aimed at a older generation so this is not needed in this newslewtter, it is meant to contain information for the parents ort guardians to be advised on. the whole newletter has the majority of it covered with text. there should be more images to attract readers than just having text which is boring for readers.
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